一．“简约”型商务函电：
in before email attached ,including the xxx picture.（看，简约至此，称谓，落款全省了．高!但若发至的不是个人邮箱，恐怕对方也就收不到了．于是不得不连名带姓的重发一次，看来这时间也不一定真能节省下来．）
二．“精确”型商务函电
Thanks for your mail. As for the copy of CE and SAA, I will fax them to you within these two days.（“within two days”? fax是及时性的动词，你是说你要花上两天的时间去传真？这样的话，我就不得不在传真机跟前不吃不喝地干等两天？拜托，如果不能确定具定传真时间，就请说“I’ll advise you the exact fax time once confirmation”）
三．“大张旗鼓”型商务函电
Per your information, you would like us to quote you the prices as below. Pls kindly check. Thanks. XXX
Now we would like to introduce our company to you. Our company XXX Founded in the year 1999. It’s headquarters at the foot of beautiful XXX Mountain. Which called“the lung of Guang Zhou, also close to the south gate Shenzhen city” . We specialize in manufacturing all kinds of XXX. Now factories we own covering an area of XXX㎡, more than XXX workers, a most professional team consisting of technicans and sales. After 5 years hard working.our company has developed into a large corporation, integrated with XXX , manufacturing processing and trading. Since the first day of establishment. We insist in this creed“XXX” led by customers’s requirement, based on quality, ruled with ISO9001:2000, following fashions. We take it as our goal to build famous brand. Products bearing“XXX”are sold all over the world , such as America, Europe, Southeast Asia and Middle East, etc. (老兄，
